literature

Escape

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Literature Text

I am trying to breathe,
but it's too hard when
I am drowning inside
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frazzled-mage's avatar
Lovely poem...it has 17 syllables like a haiku and I thought it was at first. The innate fear we all have of drowning makes this all the more powerful.

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